Kick Butt Comments

This was Pirata's comment on Mihoko's banana cake recipe. There are some small mistakes, but this is perfect! This is exactly how I want you to comment on the writing assignments:

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CONTENT
I think, it's easy and clear to understand.

COHESIVENESS
I liked the order that you wrote the recipe,
because it's easy to read.

GRAMMAR
The way you wrote 338F, it lacks the Farenheit symbol.

Add the eggs little by little and THE banana,
I think you forgot THE.

3 walnuts..... plural, not singular

And the last n.6, whipped cream, not whipp cream
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Well done, Pirata. Well done.