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Two stills from ふりっじす Fridges: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EnxhMtnc6t0
http://mihokopasadena102.blogspot.com/2009/01/fridges.html
Sunday, January 25, 2009
My review of Fridges
This is a short animation movie. In this movie, a refrigerator is personified. One night, a refrigerator is thrown away. But he believes that he still can work, and try to show it. But he realizes that the real society is harder than he thinks. The refrigerator represents the people who are dismissed from their company. At first, they try to find other job, but when they see it’s difficult, some of them try to kill themselves with despair. Even if they could find a new job and become happy, there appears other person who is dismissed. It seems continue eternally. Through this movie, we are confronted with the problem which is happening in this society.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EnxhMtnc6t0
time 6:55
from You Tube
CONTENT
The content’s fine. I was worried that you told the reader so much that it would spoil the movie, but because you discussed the analogy instead of refrigerators (“The refrigerator represents the people who are dismissed from their company.”), I think that it works.
COHESIVENESS
The cohesiveness was quite good. However, some small grammatical and vocabulary errors meant that it didn’t flow as well as it could have.
GRAMMAR AND VOCABULARY
My Review of Fridges
“Fridges” is a short animated movie. In this movie, a refrigerator is personified. One night, a refrigerator is thrown away, but he believes that he still can work, and tries to show it. However, he soon realizes that society is harder than he thought. The refrigerator represents people who are dismissed from their job. At first, they try to find another job, but when they see it’s difficult, some of them try to kill themselves out of despair. Even if they could find a new job and become happy, another person might lose theirs. It seems to continue eternally. Through this movie, we are confronted with a problem which is happening in society.
"The content’s fine. I was worried that you told the reader so much that it would spoil the movie,"
ReplyDeleteTeacher, Why you think told to much it would spoil the movie? Review i think is talking about someone's opinion when they finish the movie.I think is something like conclusion.So it's hard to write if they don't talk much about the movie. I think if you write so few that doesn't attract me to see.